If I was on this zip line across a river I would hear people scream in fear and really scared. Because if it breaks like if to many people has been on it or its been rusted from the rain.
I wonder if anyone has fell off or even died falling off that and if the thing attached to you might intach and make you fall. I think there would be crocodiles and maybe snakes if they have them there.
If i was on that i would close my eyes just in case and i would see other kids and maybe even adults and i would see the fear on there face. I would be mostly scared of the zip line thing that attaches to you if it breaks you are done for.
And i would make sure that my bag is attached to me good cause that would be bad if it falls cause you would have your lunch and your Chromebook and other things. I wonder how long it would take to get across the river and how many people go across it a day, and maybe what animals and sea Creatures are in the river.
HI Dean
ReplyDeleteI like how You included falling and dying You are good at writing. This piece it interesting. I leant that it it dangerous if you fall because you will die. How did you write that?